It does not help you rank
This is the single most useful thing to know about the field. Apple does not index the App Store description for search, unlike Google Play, which does index its long description. Every hour spent seeding keywords into App Store description prose is an hour spent on nothing.
That is freeing rather than limiting. It means the description can be written purely for the person reading it.
Not indexed. Write it for the reader, not the algorithm.
Three lines above the fold
The product page shows roughly three lines before a More link. Most people never tap it. So the opening has to state what the app does and who it is for, in plain words, immediately.
Lead with the outcome, not the origin story. "Split a restaurant bill between friends in two taps, including tip and uneven shares" earns the tap on More. "We started this app because we love food" does not.
Assume the More link is never tapped. Say the whole thing above it.
Then let it be scannable
Below the fold, short paragraphs and a simple list of what the app does will be skimmed by the people who are genuinely considering it. A dense block will not be read at all.
Keep the awards, the press quotes and the changelog near the bottom. They reassure someone who is already interested and they do not create interest on their own.
Promotional text is your fast lane
The 170 characters of promotional text sit above the description and, unlike everything else, can be changed at any time without submitting a new build for review.
Use it for anything time-bound: a sale, a new feature, a seasonal hook, a fix for something people are complaining about in reviews. It is the only part of your listing that can respond to this week.
170 characters, changeable any day, no review. The only field that can react.